The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country betweeen 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mian feartures, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the change
of
the number of Change preposition
in
shops
over 7-year
period. Add an article
a 7-year
Overall
, it is clear that
the number of shops
in 7 years decreased or downtrend.
At the beginning of the year, shop openings accounted for 8,500 while
closures were approximately only 6,400. In 2012, the number of opening shops
decreased significantly around 50% from the beginning while
closure shops
only slightly decreased by almost 400. Moreover
, from 2012 to 2014, both of them were
increased and almost similar amount.
Looking at the figures, Unnecessary verb
apply
shops
that will be open for only around 700 in 2015 and this
was a significant change and reached the bottom for along the periods. Following that, it was increased 5 times in 2016 and only slightly changed until the end of the period. Closing shops
decreased around 30% from 2014 to 2015 and remained the same until 2017. At the end
of the period, only 3,000 shops
were closed.Submitted by rezaf.permadi on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words shops with synonyms.
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