Computer and A.I technology being used for online education. Can artificial intelligence enhance the learning experience. Is this a postitive or negative development?

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Nowadays, people and artificial
intelligence
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are relating to each other
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dependently, especially,
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computers
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when computers
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or artificial
intelligence
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are used for
education
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in
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online. Actually,
computers
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and technological artificial
intelligence
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are able to increase learning
experience
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and they are
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playing an important role in enhancing human
education
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in the future. First of all,
computers
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and AI
technology
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could help
humans
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for learning
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or
gaining
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knowledge and they can give
humans
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experience
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from
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them
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or study. People always improve their
invention
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inventions
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about AI
technology
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, so these inventions are in the new version.
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, AI
technology
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gives them a lot of
experience
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about update
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in updating
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information quickly and effectively.
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, students usually search
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for information
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and some knowledge about their lessons, homework and so on
within
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the Internet.
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, artificial
intelligence
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and modern
computers
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are very useful and helpful for
educational
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system. They give knowledge and effective
experience
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for
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to
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humans
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who need these
advantage
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advantages
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from
technology
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to make their
life
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less difficult, especially, for school in
education
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. Somehow, these technological artificial
intelligence
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is
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is also run
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also
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ran by
humans
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and do not out of control. In conclusion,
computers
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and A.
I
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technology
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are
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very useful in
education
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, for students and
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for other types of
career
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careers
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relate
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to
education
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. Because of never
being
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lost control
by
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of
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humans
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,
technology
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and AI for
education
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work effectively and reliably to improve students's skills.

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Try to develop your examples more concretely by linking them directly to how AI and computers enhance educational outcomes. Specific examples or case studies can strengthen your argument.
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Enhance your essay by structuring it into clear paragraphs, each with a singular main idea. This can improve the overall coherence and make your argument more persuasive.
Coherence & Cohesion
Work on varying your sentence structures to make your writing more engaging and to demonstrate a wide range of grammatical structures.
Task Achievement
You addressed the topic directly and provided a clear position on the benefits of AI and computer technology in education.
Coherence & Cohesion
You provided a conclusion that summarized your main points effectively, reinforcing your argument positively.

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