The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Asian countries residing in cities between 1970 and 2020,

along with

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the figures

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predicted

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between

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2030 and 2040.

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whereas

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Malaysia and

Thailand

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had a stable increase, both

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Philipines

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the Philipines

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and Indonesia

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although

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rose, two nations showed a fluctuation trend in

period

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of research.

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with

Thailand

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and Malaysia, the number of Malaysia was launched at 30

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,

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for second and more 17

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percent

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than

Thailand

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, which was not

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until the predictions in 2040. In the next 20

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, in 1990, both

Maylaysia

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Malaysia

and

Thailand

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grown

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smally

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small

at 42 and 25

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before

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enormously and predicted

peaked

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at 82 and 60

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percent

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in 2040 respectively. In

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Philipines

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Philippines

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, the states started at 32 the highest figures in the next 10

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, no

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occured

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occurred

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, the percentage began more in 1990 and after a decline from 48 to 41 in 2010, the

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was constantly go

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up and was predicted 55

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percent

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in 2040. Deal with Indonesia, the

cocuntry

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country

had a similar with

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during

first

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20

years

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, in 40

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later, it

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at 30

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percent

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and just was predicted to have more population at 50

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percent

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in 2040.