The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart below illustrates the percentage of the population in four
southeast
Asian countries residing in cities between 1970 and 2020, Capitalize word
Southeast
along with
the figures were
predicted Unnecessary verb
apply
during
2030 and 2040.
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between
It is clear that
whereas
Malaysia and Thailand
had a stable increase, both Philipines
and Indonesia Correct article usage
the Philipines
although
rose, two nations showed a fluctuation trend in Correct word choice
apply
period
of research.
Add an article
the period
To begin
with Thailand
and Malaysia, the number of Malaysia was launched at 30 percent
, Change the spelling
per cent
account
for second and more 17 Wrong verb form
accounting
percent
than Change the spelling
per cent
Thailand
, which was not change
until the predictions in 2040. In the next 20 Wrong verb form
changed
years
, in 1990, both Maylaysia
and Correct your spelling
Malaysia
Thailand
grown
Add the auxiliary verb
grew
have grown
smally
at 42 and 25 Correct your spelling
small
percent
before Change the spelling
per cent
jumped
enormously and predicted Wrong verb form
jumping
peaked
at 82 and 60 Change the verb form
to peak
percent
in 2040 respectively.
In Change the spelling
per cent
Philipines
, the states started at 32 the highest figures in the next 10 Correct your spelling
Philippines
years
, no any
change Correct quantifier usage
apply
occured
, the percentage began more in 1990 and after a decline from 48 to 41 in 2010, the Correct your spelling
occurred
occurs
Philipines
was constantly go
up and was predicted 55 Change the verb form
was constantly going
percent
in 2040. Deal with Indonesia, the Change the spelling
per cent
cocuntry
had a similar with Correct your spelling
country
Philipines
during first
20 Correct article usage
the first
years
, in 40 years
later, it maintain
at 30 Wrong verb form
maintained
percent
and just was predicted to have more population at 50 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in 2040.Change the spelling
per cent
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