The chart below gives information about global sales of games software, CDs and DVD or video. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information.

The chart below gives information about global sales of games software, CDs and DVD or video.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information.
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The chart illustrates the amount of global sales of
games
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software
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, CDs and DVDs or videos in the years 2000-2003. Units are measured in billions of dollars.
Overall
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it is clear that
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the first preference during
this
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period of time was CDs. DVD or video get to the second place for its popularity,
while
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games
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software
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appears to be the least preferred one. In terms of CDs, the number of copies sold in 2000 and 2003 is almost the same.
Thus
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in
this
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period, over 30 $bn copies were sold. The number of copies sold in 2000 and 2003 is almost the same. Both
games
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software
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and DVD/video started at the number between 10-20 $bn.
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the increase in
games
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software
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doesn't seem to be major, it has doubled itself and in 2003 almost reached the point of 20 $bn. DVD and video in the meantime showed incredible growth and set the point of 30 billion dollars in 2003.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words games, software with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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