Some people think that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones in communication has negative effects on young people's reading and writing skill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is thought that those who

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an early age are more likely to be negatively impacted by the

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utilization of

smart phones

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and computers in conversation. From my perspective, I strongly disagree with

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and will show my reasons in

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essay. First of all, using multifunctional devices

such

as cell phones and laptops to communicate with other people makes them more prone to illnesses and diseases as the implication of sticking

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to their digital screens

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a long time. the mitigation in

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capability and getting myopia are a case in point for

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which limits them to

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or

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.

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can be illustrated by a minority of Vietnamese young students who immerse themselves in virtual worlds and just express themselves with others through social chatting platforms.

As a result

, they soon find

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to read books and lessons making them have no knowledge to apply

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writing

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.

Furthermore

, the consequences of increasing chat with friends and family by digital devices

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lessen the speed of their development. The primary reason is that people expand their knowledge about cultures and languages by having direct

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conversations

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with others as

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helps them enhance

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diverse vocabulary and understanding, which plays a vital role in developing writing and reading skills.

For instance

, international students improve their

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of reading and writing in English by daily practice in

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the real

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world.

Therefore

, using computers and phones to converse with people will mitigate the speed of development. In conclusion, I believe that kids will have wrong decision in their life as the result of the incorrect way that they choose to communicate. Language limitation and short-sighted eyes are two of the most outstanding negative that are needed to be taken into consideration in order to avoid problems.