The chart below gives information about global sales of games software, CDs and DVD or video. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information.
The bar graph illustrates the number of sales, and how they had changed it in the world, of three different electronic articles in
billion
dollars from 2000 to 2003.
Overall
, it is easy to observe throughout the data, that compact disk was the highest preference in the four years. On the other hand
, the number of DVD and video sales was the lowest chosen in the international market from 2000 to 2003.
Firstly
, CDs had a sharp increase from 2000 to 2003 reaching over 30 billion
dollars in sales. Moreover
, DVDs and videos also
had an important rise of more than 10 billion
more from the beginning of the data.
In addition
, Only the sale of CDs showed a small dip that started in 2001 with one billion
less, and the next year made the same, until 2002 when it reached almost 32 billion
dollars. However
, it was keep
steady until 2003.Wrong verb form
kept
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