A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old fashioned values such as honor, kindness and trust no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
People
are rated on the basis of their money power or how well they put themselves in the
society rather than reputation, good behaviour and truthfulness. These days a Correct article usage
apply
person
is identified by his financial power or his stand in his social environment. Today, nobody seems to be interested in traditional
way of identifying a Add an article
the traditional
a traditional
person
by his Trueness, reliebility
and Correct your spelling
reliability
self worth
. I agree with the statement. Add a hyphen
self-worth
Following
essay will explain, how social media has made material things and social status more valuable to Change the article
The following
people
. Furthermore
, the essay will showcase Correct article usage
the honor
honor
, Change the spelling
honour
politness
and trueness of a Correct your spelling
politeness
person
has
started to fade away from society.
We live in a digital world, where everything is one click away. Correct pronoun usage
who has
This
has brought us to a stand where,
when a Remove the comma
apply
person
starts to post his pictures on social media with his new car, home or lifestyle. People
starts
to consider him as successful and consider him to be high on social grounds. Change the verb form
start
For example
: There have been instanses
where many social media Correct your spelling
instances
influencer
have clicked pictures in a private jet and Fix the agreement mistake
influencers
luxuarious
Correct your spelling
luxurious
home
. which was not there. They were just used to click pictures.
These overhyped things Fix the agreement mistake
homes
which
are showcased by Correct pronoun usage
apply
people
to present themselves as high in the
society. Correct article usage
apply
World
has started to forget the true identity of a Correct article usage
The world
person
which used to be judged by kind
behaviour of a Correct article usage
the kind
person
who used to forgive individualsCorrect word choice
and, Truthfulness
, Truthfulness
of a Correct your spelling
the truthfulness
person
who's word used to be his world. and honor
used to be Change the spelling
honour
Add an article
an outmost
the outmost
outmost
priority of a Correct your spelling
utmost
person
.
It can be concluded by this
that, money can be earned by a
idea and dedication but, that money is of no use if we don't have a strong character which is showcased by Change the article
an
honor
, trust and kindness.Change the spelling
honour
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