You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.
The bar chart illustrates data about the percentage of families that spent their weekly income in one country between 1968 and 2018.
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that the type of spending in 1968 and 2018 was quite different. The food
in 1968 was the top spending Correct article usage
Food
in
each week Change preposition
apply
while
The
Leisure in 2018 was the highest of expenses. Correct article usage
apply
However
, The fuel and power in 1968 were as low as in 2018.
According to
1986, food was the peak of spending in families around
35% which was very different from other consumption. Change preposition
at around
However
, the
housing, Clothing and footwear were similar the number Correct article usage
apply
of
spent approximately 10% Change preposition
apply
while
the household goods, personal goods and transport, there were equal expenditure
Fix the agreement mistake
expenditures
just
under 10%. Change preposition
of just
Moreover
, the fuel and power was
the lowest Change the verb form
were
overall
.
In addition
, in 2018, leisure was
a peak of just over 20% and close to housing had Verb problem
had
the
percentage of Correct article usage
a
spent
18%. Verb problem
apply
While
the proportion of food and transport was nearly 15%. However
, remaining
expenses were similar at around 10%.Correct article usage
the remaining
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