The two maps below show substantial changes of an island befor and after equipment of some tourist facilities.
A glance at the maps provides revisions of an island before and after installing some tourist facilities.
Overall
, the island is surrounded by a sea and has a beach
and some trees before exploitation. However
, the trees did not be removed after the equipment.
According to
the information shown on the maps, there were two areas for accommodation and one
restaurant and one
reception were installed. Besides
, there was a vehicle track surrounding the reception with one
side towards the restaurant and the other was
connected with the pier.Unnecessary verb
apply
Moreover
, both accommodation regions had foodpaths, whilst the one
which was close to the beach
had one
particular food path towards the beach
. In addition
, there were some sailboats parked aside from the pier. What should be particularly mentioned is that the beach
was scheduled to be a swimming region.
To sum up
, it can be apparently seen that only two third
of the island was exploited as there was a proportion which did not set up any facilities.Correct your spelling
two-thirds
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