Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar , which causes many health problems.Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Some manufactured foods and drinks contain high levels of

sugar

, which can influence

people

and lead to several

health

problems.Some

people

argue that the cost of sugary should be increased in order to lead

people

to consume less

sugar

routine.I completely disagree because

that is

not the best solution to decrease the

consumer

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of

sugar

.I will discuss in

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essay some answers to

this

topic. On the one hand , indeed at the moment some foods and drinks produce

with

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high levels of

sugar

for

people

and have a lot of requirements

of

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this

.In that case , we must reveal and educate the consequences of

health

problems

instead

of

increase

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the cost.

Accordingly

,they will realize their body's organs may stuck

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some expensive curing.

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,

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type of work can

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out by advertising on TV channels and putting up posters on the street walls.

Additionally

, doctors play a significant role in

this

matter as they need to explain to

people

by saying, 'It is harmful to consume excessive sugary food beyond normal limits.''

On the other hand

, from my perspective additional way

prevent

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people

from eating too many products which is including

the

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sugary elements ,

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while

the production process

we

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must label the " it is not for diabetes sugary

people

" words ,

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this

way , we may able to earn to reduce the

health

issues of

people

or consumers figure.

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to

this

, after producing

this

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types of food and drink all store's customers service need to advise alternative products

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example, fresh water , unsweetened beverages and naturally useful fruits.

To conclude

, many

people

believe putting expensive

price

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prices

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on sugary products will prevent consuming too much and help to reduce

the

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health

issues.

However

,

that is

not the best way because wealthy

people

certainly can afford to buy it.