The chart below shows the changes in three different areas of crime in Machester city centre from 2003-2012.
The line graph illustrates the differences in three various regions of crime(burglary,
car
theft
, robbery
) in Manchester city center
between 2003 and 2012.
Change the spelling
centre
Overall
, it is clearly seen from the graph that the lowest point
was robbery
, then
, in the second place was burglary, and the last
one and highest point
was car
theft
.
Let's start with robbery
. First of all, the starting point
was about 520 in 2003 and it rose gradually, reached
its peak in 2005 (approximately 590). It plunged to its lowest 500 in 2008, next Wrong verb form
reaching
robbery
peaked at 530 in 2010 and finally
it ended at 520 in 2012.
When looking at the
Correct article usage
apply
car
theft
, it is noticeable that car
theft
overtook about 2400 in 2003 and it decreased sharply with
2000 in 2006, Change preposition
to
then
it grew rapidly to nearly 2600 in 2010. As a result
, it experienced an upward of almost 2750 in 2012.Therefore
, two of crime
types Correct article usage
the crime
such
as, burglary and robbery
both
Correct pronoun usage
apply
of
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apply
them
witnessed its lowest Correct pronoun usage
apply
point
in 2008.Submitted by elnur.adil on
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