The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.

The graph below illustrates

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the cyclation

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of

water

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in

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on

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3 levels of the earth's surface.

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, the 3 main stages are shown on the diagram, consisting of

water

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evaporation from the

ocean

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, rainfalls, and

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finally

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water

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runs back to the

ocean

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again. looking at the details,

water

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in the

ocean

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evaporates and its condensed form creates clouds in the air(

which

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apply

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80%of their

water

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is taken from the

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), after that, precipitation occurs

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formation

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the formation

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of clouds in either snow or rain formats. snow takes

o=place

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place

in the

montains

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mountains

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rains fall in the lakes,

then

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, waters in the lakes go underground and

creat

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create

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groundwater, snow in the

montains

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mountains

gradually runs down in

water

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form and join the underground

water

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,

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, the salty underground

water

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( because of the procedures which it

hase

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has

undergone it is salty) goes back to the

ocean

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through 2 ways that connect the

ocean

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to the underground.