The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.
The graph below illustrates
cyclation
of Correct article usage
the cyclation
water
in
3 levels of the earth's surface.
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on
Overall
, the 3 main stages are shown on the diagram, consisting of water
evaporation from the ocean
, rainfalls, and finally
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finally,
water
runs back to the ocean
again.
looking at the details, water
in the ocean
evaporates and its condensed form creates clouds in the air(which
80%of their Correct pronoun usage
apply
water
is taken from the ocean
), after that, precipitation occurs due to
formation
of clouds in either snow or rain formats. snow takes Correct article usage
the formation
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in the Correct your spelling
place
montains
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mountains
while
rains fall in the lakes, then
, waters in the lakes go underground and creat
groundwater, snow in the Correct your spelling
create
montains
gradually runs down in Correct your spelling
mountains
water
form and join the underground water
, finally
, the salty underground water
( because of the procedures which it hase
undergone it is salty) goes back to the Correct your spelling
has
ocean
through 2 ways that connect the ocean
to the underground.Submitted by soroush.nezami on
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