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The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.** **Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.*

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.** **Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.*
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the population of
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 ,Malaysia , Thailand and Indonesia resides in urban cities from 1970 to 2020 with forecast for
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 2 decades
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 countries citizens prefer to live in cities has increased from 1970 to 2040.In
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 there is a decline between 1990 to 2010 respectively
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