The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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depict

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depicts

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the Copper , nickel and Zinc prices

varies

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varied

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montly

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monthly

during

year

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the year

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2014.

Over all

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Overall

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,

it is clear that

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all

the

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apply

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three metal prices

fluctuates

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fluctuate

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.

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However

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How ever

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However

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in the month of June all metal

have

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negative

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a negative

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percentage Nickel starts

with

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at

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6 % in the month of January , drastically

decline

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declines

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till June and after that

plateaued

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for 3 months

July

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from July

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to August With -1 % and

rise

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to 2%

in

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end

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the end

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of the year .

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, Copper has fluctuated

through out

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throughout

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the year ,

begin

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beginning

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with

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a 2%fall

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2%fall

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2 %fall

down till March around -0.5 % , steady for a month and

grow

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growing

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back to approximately 1.5 %in December.

For zinc

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Zinc

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begin

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began

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from mid of February

with

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3

percent

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per cent

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and had

decrease

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a decreasing

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trend till June -1%

remain

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remained

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stagnant from July to September

with

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-0.5 % and

peak

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peaked

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to

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2% by December as highest among

three

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the three

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metals in 2014