The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph
depict
the Copper , nickel and Zinc prices Change the verb form
depicts
varies
Wrong verb form
varied
montly
during Correct your spelling
monthly
year
2014.
Change the article
the year
Over all
, Correct your spelling
Overall
it is clear that
all the
three metal prices Correct article usage
apply
fluctuates
. Change the verb form
fluctuate
Correct your spelling
However
How ever
in the month of June all metal Correct your spelling
However
have
Change the verb form
has
negative
percentage
Nickel starts Add an article
a negative
with
6 % in the month of January , drastically Change preposition
at
decline
till June and after that Correct subject-verb agreement
declines
plateaued
for 3 months Replace the word
plateaus
July
to August With -1 % and Change preposition
from July
rise
to 2% Correct subject-verb agreement
rises
in
Change preposition
at
end
of the year .Add an article
the end
On the other hand
, Copper has fluctuated through out
the year , Correct your spelling
throughout
begin
with Wrong verb form
beginning
Correct article usage
a 2%fall
2%fall
down till March around -0.5 % , steady for a month and Correct your spelling
2 %fall
grow
back to approximately 1.5 %in December.
Wrong verb form
growing
For zinc
Change preposition
Zinc
begin
from mid of February Wrong verb form
began
with
3 Change preposition
at
percent
and had Change the spelling
per cent
decrease
trend till June -1% Replace the word
a decreasing
remain
stagnant from July to September Wrong verb form
remained
with
-0.5 % and Change preposition
at
peak
Wrong verb form
peaked
to
2% by December as highest among Change preposition
at
three
metals in 2014Correct article usage
the three
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