The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000
The line graph depicts the difference in
consumption
of hamburgers, pizza
, and fried chicken
by young people in Mauritius in a 30-year
period
, starting from 1985. Overall
, it can be seen that the consumption
of pizza
experienced a downward trend , while
the amount of pizza
and fried chicken
consumed drastically increased over the provided period
.
Initially
, in 1985, pizza
was the most popular food with the highest number of times
eaten per year
roughly 60 times
. The consumption
dropped rapidly throughout
30 years, finishing at about 10 Change preposition
over
times
at the end
of the period
, in 2015.
Conversely
, fried chicken
was the least popular food, starting at approximately 10 times
per year
. After that, the consumption
of fried chicken
grew slowly until 1995, with 20 times
eaten per year
. Then
, the trend dramatically increase
between 1995 to 2005, reaching 60 Wrong verb form
increased
times
eaten per year
, and remained steady until 2010. It showed a small growth in the last
five years to finished
at around 64 Change the form of the verb
finish
times
. However
, hamburgers,
Remove the comma
apply
Correct pronoun usage
which started
started
at 10 Wrong verb form
starting
times
, saw a sharp increase over the period
, reaching its
peak at roughly 71 Correct pronoun usage
their
times
, making it the most consumed food over the given period
.Submitted by nnatthinee on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, pizza, chicken, period, times, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
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