The two maps below show substantial changes of an island befor and after equipment of some tourist facilities.
The two maps in the
graph
reveals
crucial changes Change the verb form
reveal
of
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in
an
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the
island
before and after Correct article usage
the equipments
equipments
of some tourist Change the wording
equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
fascilities
.
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facilities
overall
, the major changes on the graph
is
that nowadays it looks much more urban than before, and it has public services Change the verb form
are
such
as a restaurant and a reception, and the main characteristic is that one part of the sea has dessapeared
.
In the past, the Correct your spelling
disappeared
island
looked isolated and with less
urban services. It showed Correct quantifier usage
fewer
sea
area in the north and south with several palms to the west and east. Correct article usage
the sea
As a result
, no public services are seeing
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seen
in
the Change preposition
on
island
.
In the after graph
, it has changed to the rural to urban one, so it has on the west side several accomodations
and the palms were preserved. Correct your spelling
accommodations
Ont he
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On the
esat
side, there Correct your spelling
east
are
the vast majority of Change the verb form
is
accomodations
, and the palms were Correct your spelling
accommodations
accommodation
also
kept. More importantly, in the center
of the Change the spelling
centre
island
we can see a restaurant Add a comma
island,
an
a reception that leads to a pier. The biggest change is the swimming area next to the beach and some boats floating Replace the word
and
ont
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in
he
south area. As Correct your spelling
the
result
, the Correct article usage
a result
graph
after
looks much more urban with a lot of public places.Correct word choice
apply
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