**The chart below gives information about the ratio of income to spending (in dollars) by Americans by age range in 2013.**

**The chart below gives information about the ratio of income to spending (in dollars) by Americans by age range in 2013.**
The bar chart illustrates the amount of earnings and spending
in
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for
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a variety of ages in the United States of America in 2013. The unit on the Y-axis is shown in dollars.
According to
the graph,
it is clear that
a majority of people spend their money less than their income.
However
, some age groups use it equally or less. From the age 35 to 54, they earned an income around well under 80000 different from spending by 20000. 55-64
also
had the same trend but they received the income at roughly 74000. Followed by 25-34 which gained a little less than 60000 and had 10000 by differences from their expense.
Moreover
, the gap between salaries and expenditures was getting closer in the age of 64 to 74 which was about 5000. American citizens who are more than 75 years old
are seemed
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to spend their money almost the same as their getting.
Additionally
, young adults in America who are less than 25 mostly gave out their wages more compared to the wage.
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