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The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
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The line graph illustrates the number of merchandise delivered by the different modes of goods
transportation
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 in the UK in a 32-year
period
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, starting from 1974. The types of
transportation
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 are categorized as
road
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,
water
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,
rail
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 and
pipeline
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.
Overall
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 , it can be seen that all the
transportation
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 experienced upward trends throughout the provided
period
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.
Initially
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, in 1974,
road
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 and
rail
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 started with over 40
million
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tonnes
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 Between 1978 and 1990, the
road
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 fluctuated to just under 80
million
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tonnes
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, and remained steady until 1994. After there, it rose gradually, reaching its peak at around 95
million
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tonnes
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, in 2002.
Similarly
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,
rail
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also
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 witnessed varied directions over the
period
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.
However
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, it finished just slightly over the beginning of the
period
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 number.
Conversely
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,
water
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 and
pipeline
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 commenced with a lower number compared to
road
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 and
rail
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 (under 40
million
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tonnes
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). Both showed a drastic increase in the first 8-year
period
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, with roughly 60
tonnes
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 for
water
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, and 25
million
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tonnes
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 for
pipeline
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, and maintained at their level. After that, these two
transportation
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 dropped minimally.
Then
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, the
water
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 rose to approximately 65
million
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tonnes
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,
while
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 the
pipeline
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 level out until 2002.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words transportation, period, road, water, rail, pipeline, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Transported goods
  • Quantities
  • Trends
  • Modes of transport
  • Rail
  • Road
  • Water
  • Pipeline
  • Fluctuations
  • Predominance
  • Economic influences
  • Societal changes
  • Technological advancements
  • Environmental impact
  • Growth
  • Steady increase/decrease
  • Comparison
  • Period (e.g., decade, years)
  • Examination
  • Implications
  • Analysis
  • Conclusion
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