The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The first pie chart illustrates an average Australian household’s usage of
energy
in percentage. The second chart shows the percentages of the greenhouse Use synonyms
gas
emissions which Use synonyms
are
result from Unnecessary verb
apply
energy
use. Use synonyms
Overall
, it can be seen that Linking Words
energy
usage of heating accounts for the biggest section in Australian households' Use synonyms
energy
use. Use synonyms
In contrast
, Linking Words
gas
emission from water heating shows the highest percentage which is 32%.
For household Use synonyms
energy
use, the Use synonyms
least
two are cooling and lighting which are 2% and 4% respectively. Correct your spelling
last
Furthermore
, refrigeration consumption is 7% which is less than other appliances by 8 percent. The second largest accounting is water heating Linking Words
energy
Use synonyms
Linking Words
that
is 30 percent.
Correct pronoun usage
which
On the other hand
, Linking Words
gas
emission from cooling is the lowest in greenhouse Use synonyms
gas
emissions which is 3%. Use synonyms
Subsequently
, the second lowest one is lighting which is less than refrigeration by 6 percent. And Linking Words
then
, Linking Words
gas
emissions Use synonyms
of
heating and other appliances account for 15% and 28% respectively.Change preposition
from
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