The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.
The pie chart shows the possible reasons
of
land degradation around the globe, Change preposition
for
while
the table depicts the causes by Linking Words
regions
. Units are measured in percentages.
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Overall
, what stands out from the graphs is that lands are mainly damaged by over-grazing. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the most affected lands are in Europe.
Looking into detail, regarding the causes, over-grazing ranked first with 35%, which is followed by the deforestation of plants with 30%. The percentage of the over-cultivation reason for land degradation is just above one in four which is fourfold other reasons(7%).
In terms of causes in different regions, in North America, 3.3% Linking Words
land
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of land
degraded
by over-cultivation, which is more than two times higher than that Add a missing verb
is degraded
by
over-grazing. Change preposition
of
However
, in Europe, most of Linking Words
lands
were damaged by deforestation (9.8%), Add an article
the lands
while
other factors were almost the same (around 6%). Linking Words
Moreover
, the figures for deforestation in North America and Oceania were less than 2%, Linking Words
whereas
over-grazing ranked first in Oceania with just above one in ten.Linking Words
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