The map show a change of coastal town, called Petland, from 1950 to 2007

The diagram illustrates the development of a seaside town,called Petland from 1950 to 2007.

Overall

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,main roads extended throughout the time period but industrial

area

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,grassland and west

side

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car parking disappeared from the diagram.

Firstly

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,the sea was converted to a yacht marina in 2007.

In contrast

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,roads were extended around the yacht marina and

also

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in the southwest

area

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.In 2007, the northeast

side

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industrial

area

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was removed from the map and multi-storey car parking,swimming pool,and shops were placed there.

In addition

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,the park was built on the northeast corner

side

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Additionally

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, west-

side

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car parking was removed from the diagram in 2007.Northwestgrassland was removed in the year 2007 and replaced by apartments and shops.

On the other hand

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, the south-east

side

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grassland disappeared from the map in 2007 and a cinema hall was added there with a single shop.The Southwest grassland

area

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was converted to houses and shops.

Furthermore

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, a new road was constructed in between the south-west

area

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where houses were built on both sides of the road.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, side with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 3 times.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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161 words

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