The chart below shows the changes in three different areas of crime in Machester city centre from 2003-2012.

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line graph illustrates the amount of

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in Manchester city centre,

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, Car Theft, and Robbery between 2003 to 2012.

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the graph, it can be seen that

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crime

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was reported the most between 2003 to 2006,

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the Car Theft is most likely to happen after 2007.

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, the city seems not to encounter the

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from robbery much. In 2003, the

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was roughly around 3,400,

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hit

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at approximately 3,750 in 2004. Afterwards, it

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dramatically to nearly 1,100 in 2008. A significantly increased to 1,500 in 2009 and remained

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at 1400

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the end of 2012.

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, the robbery

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began at only 600. It slightly jumped to 900 and

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to 500 between 2005 and 2008,

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fluctuated and hit the same amount in 2012.

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the car theft started the period at 2300. Until 2006, it surpassed the

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crime

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and rose significantly to 2800 in 2012.