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The table data below shows the top ten Internet users by country in 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table data below shows the top ten Internet users by country in 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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A glance at the table provides the top ten
Internet
users
 by country and the percentage of
population
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the population
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 in 2016.
Overall
, the vast majority of British people were
Internet
ursers
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users
 whilst the percentage of
Internet
users
 in India was the least.
According to
 the information shown in the table,
although
 China was the top
one
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country which had the most
Internet
users
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721434547 people, the
users
 were only 52.3% of the total Chinese population which was the most among the ten areas in 2016.
By contrast
, there were 92.6% of British people used the
Internet
 which was the highest proportion in the ten countries
while
 the U.K. was the top 9 country.
On the other hand
, even though there were only 34.8% of Indians used the
Internet
 ,the figure for its
users
 was 7 times more than that for English
users
.What should be particularly mentioned is that there were 91.1%
Japanese
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of Japanese
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who
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used the
Internet
 which was only 1.5% lower than
British
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the British
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users
’ percentage.
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