It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (e.g. dinosaur, dodo...) There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Regardless of the era, animal species
frequenlty
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frequently
suffer from extinction, and
humans
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beings are not the exception. Some believe that they need to prepare or prevent to happen
this
thread. I personally argue that they do not need so much preparation for that.
Firstly
,
acient
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ancient
species,
such
as
dinosaur
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dinosaurs
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, had extincted more than ten thousand years before mainly because of their ability to adapt to
enviornments
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environments
. They had no knowledge to create something to prevent extremely cold or hot situations since they easily
became
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die when natural disasters
happpened
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like
eruption
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eruptions
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.
However
,
people
can not only construct
shelter
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to
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this
disaster but
also
predict what will happen in the
nearly
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future.
Thus
, the probability of extinction is reduced and they hardly diminish in the world, and I completely agree with
this
.
On the other hand
, since predicting the future is super difficult,
people
may not be able to know that a disaster the
earch
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earth
search
has never experienced
occur
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, which leads
people
to
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extinction
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.
For instance
, the biggest earthquake in Japanese history caused
to create
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a giant tsunami, which
make
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more than five
thousands
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of
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civilians
die
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. Though they prepared
to
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tsunami by building huge walls around beaches, the
thunami
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tsunami
came over the walls and crushed numerous houses and
ficilities
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facilities
.
Thus
, the power of prediction by
people
is not enough at
this
moment since they need to improve it. In conclusion,
while
there
is
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the certain
reason
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reasons
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why
humans
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beings have to prepare
extinction
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for extinction
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, the proportion is not too huge for them because of their knowledge and technology.
Thus
, they should not spend too much time
for
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this
prevention.
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