The maps show Southside , a shopping mall as it is now , and plans for its development. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where revealent . Write at least 150 words
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The figures illustrate the changes that will take place in the Southside
area
including the shopping mall, golf course, car park
and gym.
Overall
, it is clear that
some facilities will be demolished and replaced by both a car park
and shipping centre which will be expanded to the right-hand side of the area
.
Looking at the shopping mall plan, There will be a separation between a department store and a shopping area
. A supermarket and a toilet will remain at the same place while
a cafe will be repurposed into an info centre. A play area
, a noodle shop and cinemas will vanish and the new beauty salon, two shoe stores, cosmetics store and gift shop will be erected instead
. Moreover
, Three blocks of fashion stores spring up to the right of the toilet. The golf course , stand-alone fitness and a park
are going to be flattened and the car park
will be extended as same as the shopping centre to the end of the area
. Additionally
, The department store from the mall will be relocated to the old golf course and park
with the new entrance to the building itself.Submitted by nnatthinee on
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