The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The bar chart provides information about the proportion of Australians who regularly
engage
in exercise across different Wrong verb form
engaged
age
groups and genders in 2010.
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It is clear that
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men
aged 15-24 engaged in the most physical activity, Use synonyms
while
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women
aged 45-54 were the most active among all Use synonyms
age
groups. Use synonyms
Additionally
, the lowest participation was observed in Linking Words
women
over 60 and Use synonyms
men
aged 35-44."
Looking at the information in more detail for Use synonyms
women
, those aged 45-54 constituted 53.3% and were the most active among all Use synonyms
age
distributions. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, the chart shows that Linking Words
men
aged 15-24 had the highest participation rate at 52.8%.
In terms of the elderly, Use synonyms
men
and Use synonyms
women
exhibited similar proportions; the former constituted 46.7% Use synonyms
while
the latter accounted for 47.1%. It can be seen that Linking Words
men
in the 25-44 Use synonyms
age
group had the lowest participation rate at 39.5%, which is 12% lower than that of Use synonyms
women
in the same Use synonyms
age
group.Use synonyms
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