The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The bar chart provides information about the proportion of Australians who regularly
engage
in exercise across different Wrong verb form
engaged
age
groups and genders in 2010.
"It is clear that
men
aged 15-24 engaged in the most physical activity, while
women
aged 45-54 were the most active among all age
groups. Additionally
, the lowest participation was observed in women
over 60 and men
aged 35-44."
Looking at the information in more detail for women
, those aged 45-54 constituted 53.3% and were the most active among all age
distributions. On the other hand
, the chart shows that men
aged 15-24 had the highest participation rate at 52.8%.
In terms of the elderly, men
and women
exhibited similar proportions; the former constituted 46.7% while
the latter accounted for 47.1%. It can be seen that men
in the 25-44 age
group had the lowest participation rate at 39.5%, which is 12% lower than that of women
in the same age
group.Submitted by zora840810 on
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