The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of junk food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000

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The line graph illustrates the consumption of junk foods by Australian adolescents between 1975 and 2000.
Overall
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, the consumption of fish and ships decreased dramatically over the period,
whereas
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pizza and hamburgers increased.
To begin
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with, Most Australian teenagers adored fish and ships in 1975, at 100
times
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pred year
while
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pizza and hamburgers were eaten less than 10
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.
Nevertheless
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, In 1980, the amount of time fish and ships fell to around 85,
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rose significantly to approximately 95 in 1985. After that, the consumption of it sharply declined over 15 years period and finished around 38
times
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in 2000.
On the other hand
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, the number of consumed hamburgers significantly climbed to roughly 85 in 1985,
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jumped to reach a peak at 100
times
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in 1995 and steady until the end of 2000.
Furthermore
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, pizza ingestion
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rose considerably in 1995, at about 85
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, and
then
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remained constant from 1995 to 2000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words times with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fluctuate
  • Spike
  • Dip
  • Steady growth
  • Decline
  • Plateau
  • Consumption patterns
  • Fast food
  • Processed snacks
  • Health consciousness
  • Marketing influence
  • Demographic factors
  • Sedentary lifestyle
  • Nutritional education
  • Epidemiological impact
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