The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of junk food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000

The line graph illustrates the consumption of junk foods by Australian adolescents between 1975 and 2000.
Overall
, the consumption of fish and ships decreased dramatically over the period,
whereas
pizza and hamburgers increased.
To begin
with, Most Australian teenagers adored fish and ships in 1975, at 100
times
pred year
while
pizza and hamburgers were eaten less than 10
times
.
Nevertheless
, In 1980, the amount of time fish and ships fell to around 85,
then
rose significantly to approximately 95 in 1985. After that, the consumption of it sharply declined over 15 years period and finished around 38
times
in 2000.
On the other hand
, the number of consumed hamburgers significantly climbed to roughly 85 in 1985,
then
jumped to reach a peak at 100
times
in 1995 and steady until the end of 2000.
Furthermore
, pizza ingestion
also
rose considerably in 1995, at about 85
times
, and
then
remained constant from 1995 to 2000.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fluctuate
  • Spike
  • Dip
  • Steady growth
  • Decline
  • Plateau
  • Consumption patterns
  • Fast food
  • Processed snacks
  • Health consciousness
  • Marketing influence
  • Demographic factors
  • Sedentary lifestyle
  • Nutritional education
  • Epidemiological impact
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