In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In recent years, there have been vast advances in all aspects of

peopl's

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people's

peoples

lives especially in the field of communication. Nowadays, an

incresing

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increasing

number of people

use

images

as tools to transfer their messages faster and more effectively. These changes have brought a special concern regarding the efficacy of

this

kind of communication. In

this

essay, I am going to write about

this

issue and give my personal idea. Obviously,

images

, pictures and,

grafs

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graphs

grafts

have the potential to send a certain message immediately.

For example

, the media

use

images

to give detailed information and immediate impact

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their news coverage. The advertising industries

also

use

eye-catching videos and pictures to attract

peoples

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people

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attentions

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attention

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and persuade them to spend on whatever they offer.

Moreover

, the vast impact of the photos on the entertainment industries

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undeniable too.

On the other hand

due to

the

wide spread

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modern mobile phones taking and sending photos is becoming a part of regular personal conversation.

However

, pictures

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are

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not strong enough to be used as a single tool for communication.

This

is because they can interpreted in

range

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of different ways.

This

means that

images

can be misleading and

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less

effective if

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used alone.

Therefore

, captions, subtitles, comments and, any other kind of written or spoken words are essential to be used

along with

the visual attractions to

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the effectiveness.

To conclude

, based on what is discussed above, using visual attractions alone is not powerful enough and they should be used

along with

written or spoken words.

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Language Accuracy

Ensure spelling accuracy for critical vocabulary ('graphs', 'people's attentions', 'widespread', 'left').

Sentence Variety

Try to explore more varied sentence structures to enhance readability and engagement.

Clarity & Positioning

Clarify your stance with a more explicit thesis statement in the introduction for stronger task achievement.

Support & Examples

Effective use of examples to support points about the impact of images in communication.

Structure

Good overall structure, with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.

Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.

Linking words for giving examples:

for example
for instance
to illustrate this
to give a clear example
such as
namely
to illustrate
take, for example

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10Linking words
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2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

257 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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