In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In recent years, there have been vast advances in all aspects of
peopl's
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people's
peoples
lives especially in the field of communication. Nowadays, an
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increasing
number of people
use
images
as tools to transfer their messages faster and more effectively. These changes have brought a special concern regarding the efficacy of
this
kind of communication. In
this
essay, I am going to write about
this
issue and give my personal idea. Obviously,
images
, pictures and,
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graphs
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have the potential to send a certain message immediately.
For example
, the media
use
images
to give detailed information and immediate impact
to
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their news coverage. The advertising industries
also
,
use
eye-catching videos and pictures to attract
peoples
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people
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,
attentions
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attention
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and persuade them to spend on whatever they offer.
Moreover
, the vast impact of the photos on the entertainment industries
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undeniable too.
On the other hand
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due to
the
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use
of
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modern mobile phones taking and sending photos is becoming a part of regular personal conversation.
However
, pictures
ate
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not strong enough to be used as a single tool for communication.
This
is because they can interpreted in
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of different ways.
This
means that
images
can be misleading and
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less
effective if
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used alone.
Therefore
, captions, subtitles, comments and, any other kind of written or spoken words are essential to be used
along with
the visual attractions to
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the effectiveness.
To conclude
, based on what is discussed above, using visual attractions alone is not powerful enough and they should be used
along with
written or spoken words.
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Language Accuracy
Ensure spelling accuracy for critical vocabulary ('graphs', 'people's attentions', 'widespread', 'left').
Sentence Variety
Try to explore more varied sentence structures to enhance readability and engagement.
Clarity & Positioning
Clarify your stance with a more explicit thesis statement in the introduction for stronger task achievement.
Support & Examples
Effective use of examples to support points about the impact of images in communication.
Structure
Good overall structure, with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.

Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.

Linking words for giving examples:

  • for example
  • for instance
  • to illustrate this
  • to give a clear example
  • such as
  • namely
  • to illustrate
  • take, for example

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Visual communication
  • Emotional impact
  • Transcend language barriers
  • Universality
  • Infographic
  • Memory retention
  • Misinterpretation
  • Manipulation
  • Complementary
  • Evocative
  • Multimedia
  • Contextual understanding
  • Ambiguity
  • Visual literacy
  • Instant communication
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