The maps show Southside , a shopping mall as it is now , and plans for its development. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where revealent . Write at least 150 words
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A glance at the maps provides the present condition of a shopping mall, Southside, and its planned development.
Overall
, both the shopping mall and its car park
area
are planned to be enlarged with the removal of the golf course, the park
and the fitness centre.
According to
the information shown on the maps, there will be an additional entrance since the department store region will be expanded and replace the golf course. Besides
, the cinemas, the noodle shop, the play area
and the café will all be removed. The cafe will be alternated by an information centre.In addition
, there will be a new beauty salon located on the site of the current play area
.Moreover
,two new shoe stores, a gift shop, and a cosmetics store will replace the noodle shop and cinemas in the plan. Besides
the aforementioned, three new fashion stores will be added. What should be particularly mentioned is that the supermarket and the toilet will remain at the same site.As for the car park
area
, it is scheduled to be extended from the present site to the south part of the park
.
To sum up
, it can be apparently seen that the new arrangement of Southside focuses on the variety of shopping stores.Submitted by s99104032 on
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