The maps show Southside , a shopping mall as it is now , and plans for its development. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where revealent . Write at least 150 words

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A glance at the maps provides the present condition of a shopping mall, Southside, and its planned development.

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, both the shopping mall and its car

park

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area

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are planned to be enlarged with the removal of the golf course, the

park

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and the fitness centre.

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the information shown on the maps, there will be an additional entrance since the department store region will be expanded and replace the golf course.

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, the cinemas, the noodle shop, the play

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and the café will all be removed. The cafe will be alternated by an information centre.

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, there will be a new beauty salon located on the site of the current play

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,two new shoe stores, a gift shop, and a cosmetics store will replace the noodle shop and cinemas in the plan.

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the aforementioned, three new fashion stores will be added. What should be particularly mentioned is that the supermarket and the toilet will remain at the same site.As for the car

park

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area

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, it is scheduled to be extended from the present site to the south part of the

park

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To sum up

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, it can be apparently seen that the new arrangement of Southside focuses on the variety of shopping stores.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words park, area with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

206 words

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