The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The given first graph illustrates the
percentage
of households
, which used various domestic appliances as
washing Correct quantifier usage
such as
machine
, Fix the agreement mistake
machines
refrigerator
and Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
vacuum
cleaner
from 1920 to 2019. The second graph presents how many hours of domestic chores Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
as
washing clothes, preparing clothes and mealsCorrect quantifier usage
such as
was
done by each household during the years shown.
Correct subject-verb agreement
were
Overall
, it can be observed, that the percentage
of households
with refrigerators and vacuum
cleaners increased dramatically while
households
with washing machines went up gradually during the century. The quantity
of hours doing housework in each household decreased significantly between 1920 and 2019.
Change the quantifier
number
According to
the given data, the percentage
of household ownership of washing machine
and Fix the agreement mistake
machines
vacuum
cleaner
rose noticeably to 70%, Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
while
the percentage
of refrigerator owners surged to 90% during the first 40 years. The number refrigerator
owners continued to Change preposition
of refrigerator
grew
and reached Change the verb
grow
the
peak in 1960, which was steady until 2019. The Correct article usage
a
percentage
of vacuum
cleaner ownership went up slowly after the
1960 year and culminated at 100% of Correct article usage
apply
households
in 2000, while
washing machine ownership fluctuated after the respectively
period and experienced small growth at more Change the word
respective
70
% in 2019.Change preposition
than 70
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