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The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates the amount of
visitors
 to International museums
such
 as the
Louvre
Museum
, London Science
Museum
, Vatican
Museum
, and Shenzhen
Museum
 from 1980 to 2015. It is noticeable that the highest
visitors
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 was
the
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to the
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Louvre
Museum
.
By contrast
, the lowest
visitors
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number of visitors
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in
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to
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 the international
museum
 was the London Science
Museum
. In 1980, the
number
 of
visitors
in
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to
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 the
Louvre
Museum
 was approximately 7.9
million
, which was higher than other museums.
In addition
, the
number
 of
visitors
in
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to
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 the
Louvre
museum
 rose to 9
million
 from 1980 to 1995.
Moreover
, the
amount
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number
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 of
visitors
in
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to
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 the
Louvre
Museum
 dropped
close
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by close
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 to 8
million
 in 2000 but the
amount
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number
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 of
visitors
 skyrocketed to 9.7
million
 over the
period
 2000, which was higher
visitor
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visitors
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 than other museums.
Furthermore
, the Vatican
Museum
 significantly increased from 5
million
 to 9.5
million
 during the
period
 1980 to 2015.
On the other hand
, the
number
 of
visitors
in
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to
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 the London Science
Museum
 was steady at 4
million
visitors
 during the
period
 1980 to 1985 and the
number
 of
visitors
 fell close to 2
million
.
However
, the
number
 of
visitors
in
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to
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 the Shenzhen
Museum
 decreased from 3.9
million
 to 3
million
 during the
period
 from 1980 to 2000 but the
number
 of
visitors
 increased to 4
million
 in 1.5 decades.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, louvre, museum, number, million, period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • visitor numbers
  • trend analysis
  • stability
  • popularity
  • significant changes
  • peak periods
  • low points
  • global tourism trends
  • economic downturns
  • natural disasters
  • tourist patterns
  • dynamic nature
  • factors influencing
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