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Nowadays an increasing numbers of profession such as doctors and teachers are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What can done to solve this.

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Due to
 the rapid growth of technology , the world has come a long way
therefore
 the lifestyle of people has changed a lot in the past few years . In the
cutting edge
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 era , the world become
an
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 global village . In the current scenario , it becomes very common to migrate to cities or other countries in order to find better job opportunities and
lifestyle
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. In
this
 contemporary epoch , it is very common to see professions like doctors , engineers and teachers leave their country to work in foreign countries . There is a range of conflicting arguments related to the assertion but every every setback comes a solution . In the succeeding monograph, I intend to delve into the setbacks
as well as
 proffer remedies to curb
this
 menace .
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Introduction
Ensure the introduction directly addresses the question asked. Clarify what problems the migration of professionals causes and hint at the solutions you will discuss.
Main Body
Focus on clearly developing your main points. Each paragraph should introduce a distinct idea or problem along with potential solutions, supported by examples or explanations.
Examples
Use more specific examples to support your arguments. This will make your essay more convincing and related to the topic directly.
Conclusion
Work on a clear, concise conclusion that summarizes the problems and solutions you've discussed, linking back to the question directly.
Topic Relevance
You've set a good foundation for discussing a complex issue with global relevance.
Structure
Your writing is coherent and follows a logical structure, making your arguments easy to follow.
Vocabulary
You use a wide range of vocabulary, which is great for showcasing linguistic skill.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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