The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
The maps
illustrates
Islip town centre for now and Change the verb form
illustrate
changes
which are planned for the future.
Overall
, what stands out from the graphs is that it is predicted there will be significant changes
in facilities, while
some residential areas will remain unchanged.
Looking into detail, regarding the small changes
, the school which is situated in the south will remain at the original site and will be expanded, while
the park just below the shops
will reduce in size. However
, there will be more housings
around the Fix the agreement mistake
housing
shops
which will be in the northeast and in the southeast of the centre. Moreover
, it is expected that the main road
will be pedestrianised, while
the road
near the school will be widened and be Dual
carriageway. Correct article usage
a Dual
Likewise
, in the countryside, a new road
will be constructed which will run from west to east.
In terms of big changes
, the shops
opposite the main road
to the north will be demolished to make way for new facilities, including a bus station, a shopping centre and a car park, whereas
the shops
opposite the main road
to the south will remain.Submitted by Name_1234 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words changes, shops, road with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 3 times.
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