The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now,  and plans for its development.
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The maps
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Islip town centre for now and
changes
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which are planned for the future.
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, what stands out from the graphs is that it is predicted there will be significant
changes
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in facilities,
while
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some residential areas will remain unchanged. Looking into detail, regarding the small
changes
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, the school which is situated in the south will remain at the original site and will be expanded,
while
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the park just below the
shops
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will reduce in size.
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, there will be more
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around the
shops
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which will be in the northeast and in the southeast of the centre.
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, it is expected that the main
road
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will be pedestrianised,
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the
road
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near the school will be widened and be
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carriageway.
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, in the countryside, a new
road
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will be constructed which will run from west to east. In terms of big
changes
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, the
shops
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opposite the main
road
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to the north will be demolished to make way for new facilities, including a bus station, a shopping centre and a car park,
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the
shops
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opposite the main
road
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to the south will remain.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words changes, shops, road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Small town
  • Centre
  • Development
  • Maps
  • Plans
  • Introduce
  • Topic
  • Purpose
  • Essay
  • Description
  • Current
  • Key features
  • Facilities
  • Advantages
  • Positive aspects
  • Benefits
  • Proposed
  • Changes
  • Improvements
  • Suggested
  • Potential
  • Course of action
  • Summarize
  • Opinion
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