One of the most discussed
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people nowadays sleep less than in the past. And what causes led it.
Furthermore
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humans
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So, in
this
essay, I will look at comparing sleep on both sides
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and
then
examine factors responsible for sleep.
One of the main reasons for
this
is hard work.
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, in the past humans worked intensively and longer.
Moreover
in a hard time which related tough requirements in wars. The second reason that might be noted, in my view, is devices like ( phones, televisions, and more),and
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all technology
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our
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periods of sleep
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.
For instance
, modern children, adults and even grandparents,
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are all dependent on
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.
Additionally
, it may seem
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an illness.
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move on effects which I mentioned. So the
thing
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lack of sleep which badly affects
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time. Specifically shortage energy, dopamine et cetera. The second thing
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attitude behavior.
For example
, it may lead
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which
also
affects your body.
Last
but not least poor brain function
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your memorizing, learning,
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, speech, coordination and controlling
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all
givesCorrect subject-verb agreement
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big disadvantages to your body.
it
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on breakChange preposition
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the temporary sleeping cycle.
In summary, by listing causes and consequences that definitely people in the past used to sleep more than nowadays. We
also
discussed
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technologies and their relation
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our bodies.
Additionally
, mention
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sleepCorrect article usage
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temporary cycle. Notice about your time sleep
then
all will be
and try to avoid sleeping late.