It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

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in their lives, whether in the professional or personal field. I assume that there are more pros than

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drawbacks

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because they bring some chances for improvements

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the comfort zone, without any enhancements. First of all, it is understandable that many people choose to do their obvious and common activities,

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, to practise some new things that might be unfamiliar and uncomfortable to them. The reason for

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is that the feeling of disappointment and failure is what scared them most.

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, it is not uncommon for employees over 40 to get stuck to their current job,

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they got paid under average salary and do not have a title for their position. Supposedly they needed to resign themselves and find a better opportunity outside,

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, they chose to stay since they thought that there would be no company that would accept the old and

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become unemployed.

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, there are a lot of benefits of trying to be on

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different sides. People are full of curiosity, by pushing themselves into a new place, some fresh experiences will be gained

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the fulfilment of the curiosity. Alternatively, the

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always bring the positive thing,

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, thanks to the troubles of

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people can learn the main morale of

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, the journey of a successful popstar Iggy Azalea started when she was moving alone to New York without any figures. She was very scared of any worst possibilities that could happen

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because she faced difficulties

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, but

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she managed to survive and gained fame by joining a record label in New York.

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, losing some to gain is a suitable phrase for

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argument since there is nothing to be worried about to accept every chance.

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, a reward

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as an admirable future could easily be led to.