The graph below shows the everage numberof UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030
The diagram displays the data of
people
who travel to work each day in the UK by car, bus and train from 1970 to 2030. In general, there are more and more Use synonyms
people
Use synonyms
use
public transportation and private vehicles, cars are always the most popular in the period.
It is clear from the chart that the figures for commuters driving cars are highest from the beginning, about 5 Wrong verb form
using
million
and reach 9 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
at the end
of the period. Compared with 2 kinds of other Linking Words
transports
, bus and train, they only have 4 Fix the agreement mistake
transport
million
and 2 Use synonyms
million
and peak at nearly 5 Use synonyms
million
.
From 1980 to 2000, car-users increased strongly by a Use synonyms
further
2 Linking Words
million
, and Use synonyms
then
rose consistently. Linking Words
Whereas
Linking Words
people
use buses decreases steadily until the year 2030 and stands at approximately 3 Use synonyms
million
. Use synonyms
By comparison
, Linking Words
people
who intend to use trains experienced Use synonyms
a
slight growth, Remove the article
apply
then
remained at 3 Linking Words
million
for a decade, from 2010 to 2020, and suddenly climbed sharply to around 5 Use synonyms
million
.Use synonyms
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