The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph in the figure indicates the levels of production of the principle fuel that
were
used in the UK from 1981 to 2000.
Change the verb form
was
Overall
, we can see that the graph analyse
three kinds of fuel. Natural gas and Petroleum show a fluctuation between different levels of production in the entire period analysed. Correct subject-verb agreement
analyses
While
, Coal, experiences a
constant and moderate growth. Correct article usage
apply
Moreover
, Petroleum is the most used fuel in the UK, with a consumption that flactuates
between 90 and 145 energy units.
More detailed, it can be noticed that Natural gas increased Correct your spelling
fluctuates
fluctuated
his
Correct pronoun usage
its
using
level, starting from around 39 energy units in 1981 and reaching 100 units in 2000. Replace the word
use
Furthemore
, the graph shows a significant rise Correct your spelling
Furthermore
of
Change preposition
in
petroleum's
use in the first four years, to Change noun form
petroleum
then
decline between 1987 and 1990 and finally
growing
again until 2000, reaching its highest point in 1999. Wrong verb form
grow
In addition
, it is
indicated a drastic peak of Coal in 1983-1984 and a constant decrease from 1986 to 2000.Unnecessary verb
apply
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