The chart below gives information about the level of education of Bulgarian people who wanted to go and live in another country in 2002, 2006 and 2008.

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The labelled diagram illustrates the educational qualification of Bulgarian

people

who wanted to migrate to another nation in 2002,2006 and 2008

Overall

,the migration

percentage

of citizens who did the higher

education

and secondary

education

reduced over

the

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time

whereas

,the

percentage

people

who did the primary and lower

education

increased from 2002 to 2008. In 2002,

people

who finished their secondary

education

wanted to leave their nation more than others and that was 65.

Then

, it gradually decreased and reached 59 in 2008. The

percentage

of higher educated

people

and lower educated

people

who left the country in 2002 was approximately

same

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the same

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. The

percentage

of migrators who completed their primary

education

level went from the country in 2002 was 18.

Then

it gradually rose to 19 within 4 years and

then

it jumped to 32 in 2008.The number of

people

who finished higher

education

left the country in 2002 and 2006 was approximately stable.

Finally

,it dramatically jumped to 32 in 2008.

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The chart below gives information about the level of education of Bulgarian people who wanted to go and live in another country in 2002, 2006 and 2008.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

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