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The chart below gives information about the level of education of Bulgarian people who wanted to go and live in another country in 2002, 2006 and 2008.

The chart below gives information about the level of education of Bulgarian people who wanted to go and live in another country in 2002, 2006 and 2008.
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The labelled diagram illustrates the educational qualification of Bulgarian
people
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 who wanted to migrate to another nation in 2002,2006 and 2008
Overall
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,the migration
percentage
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 of citizens who did the higher
education
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 and secondary
education
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 reduced over
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time
whereas
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,the
percentage
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 of
people
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 who did the primary and lower
education
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 increased from 2002 to 2008. In 2002,
people
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 who finished their secondary
education
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 wanted to leave their nation more than others and that was 65.
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, it gradually decreased and reached 59 in 2008. The
percentage
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 of higher educated
people
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 and lower educated
people
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 who left the country in 2002 was approximately
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. The
percentage
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 of migrators who completed their primary
education
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 level went from the country in 2002 was 18.
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 it gradually rose to 19 within 4 years and
then
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 it jumped to 32 in 2008.The number of
people
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 who finished higher
education
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 left the country in 2002 and 2006 was approximately stable.
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,it dramatically jumped to 32 in 2008.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, percentage, education with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "jumped" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emigration
  • tertiary education
  • secondary education
  • primary education
  • trend
  • intentions
  • emigrate
  • demographics
  • percentages
  • fluctuation
  • statistics
  • depict
  • overseas
  • significant
  • increase/decrease
  • pattern
  • move abroad
  • educational attainment
  • time frame
  • compare
  • contrast
  • analyze
  • summarize
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