The graph below presents the employment patterns in the usa between 1930 and 2010

The given line chart indicates information concerning the employment patterns in the USA from 1930 to 2010. Looking at the

overall

perspective it is readily apparent that four different categories (Industrials, Technicals, Sales and office, and Other services) gradually increased

while

, Farming, fishing, and Foresting industries considerably decreased during the given period.

To begin

with, a cursory glance at the data reveals that Farming, fishing, and Foresting employment was the highest rate in the year 1930 and the figure was approximately 80. Despite

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, these employments maintain the biggest rate until 1980.

After

this

period, it steeply declined and for the year 2010, it was the lowest ratio accounting for about 2.

In addition

, more detail of the data reveals that Technicals and

Industrials

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employment started at the lowest in 1930,

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, it slightly soared to nearly 40 and

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the highest level for the year 2010.

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, other services a little bit

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in 1940, decreased slightly to 1960, and maintained a similar level between 1960 and 2010.