The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150
The graph below depicts the frequency of US citizens having a meal in fast
food
restaurants
from 2003 until 2013.
As observed from the chart, The differences in those frequency groups are not really significant, unless in once a week and once or twice a month. The highest percentages of people ate fast food
restaurants
are also
in those two categories.
Looking more into the details, in 2003, population
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the population
were
more Unnecessary verb
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frequent consuming
fast Replace the word
frequently consumed
food
restaurants
every day, whereas
also
never by about 4% and 5%, respectively. While
, in 2006 and 2013 the rates of population eating fast food
restaurants
were almost the same by around 2.5%. However
, In A few times
a year category both 2003 and 2013 were almost the same too, with around 15% of Add a comma
times,
population
, Add an article
the population
while
in 2003 fast food
was not really popular with only about 12.5%.
In 2006, lots of people had fast food
several times a week and once a week, by approximately 20% and 32.5%, subsequently
. However
, only around 25% of people consume fast foods once or twice a month, on the contrary
, 2013 has the highest percentage roughly 32.5%.Submitted by ridhokholis9a on
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