The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150
The graph below depicts the frequency of US citizens having a meal in fast
food
restaurants
from 2003 until 2013. As observed from the chart, The differences in those frequency groups are not really significant, unless in once a week and once or twice a month. The highest percentages of people ate fast
food
restaurants
are
also
in those two categories. Looking more into the details, in 2003,
population
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were
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more
frequent consuming
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fast
food
restaurants
every day,
whereas
also
never by about 4% and 5%, respectively.
While
, in 2006 and 2013 the rates of population eating fast
food
restaurants
were almost the same by around 2.5%.
However
, In A few
times
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a year category both 2003 and 2013 were almost the same too, with around 15% of
population
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,
while
in 2003 fast
food
was not really popular with only about 12.5%. In 2006, lots of people had fast
food
several times a week and once a week, by approximately 20% and 32.5%,
subsequently
.
However
, only around 25% of people consume fast foods once or twice a month,
on the contrary
, 2013 has the highest percentage roughly 32.5%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, however, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words food, restaurants with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fast food consumption
  • dining frequency
  • decade overview
  • trend analysis
  • to dine out
  • fluctuation
  • sharp increase
  • gradual decline
  • eating habits
  • statistical comparison
  • consuming pattern
  • noteworthy change
  • anomaly
  • periodic comparison
  • data interpretation
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