The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150
The graph below depicts the frequency of US citizens having a meal in fast
food
Use synonyms
restaurants
from 2003 until 2013.
As observed from the chart, The differences in those frequency groups are not really significant, unless in once a week and once or twice a month. The highest percentages of people ate fast Use synonyms
food
Use synonyms
restaurants
are Use synonyms
also
in those two categories.
Looking more into the details, in 2003, Linking Words
population
Add an article
the population
were
more Unnecessary verb
apply
frequent consuming
fast Replace the word
frequently consumed
food
Use synonyms
restaurants
every day, Use synonyms
whereas
Linking Words
also
never by about 4% and 5%, respectively. Linking Words
While
, in 2006 and 2013 the rates of population eating fast Linking Words
food
Use synonyms
restaurants
were almost the same by around 2.5%. Use synonyms
However
, In A few Linking Words
times
a year category both 2003 and 2013 were almost the same too, with around 15% of Add a comma
times,
population
, Add an article
the population
while
in 2003 fast Linking Words
food
was not really popular with only about 12.5%.
In 2006, lots of people had fast Use synonyms
food
several times a week and once a week, by approximately 20% and 32.5%, Use synonyms
subsequently
. Linking Words
However
, only around 25% of people consume fast foods once or twice a month, Linking Words
on the contrary
, 2013 has the highest percentage roughly 32.5%.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, restaurants with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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