The graph below shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007.
The graph describes
consumption
of margarine
, low fat and reduced spreads and butter
between 1987-2007.
Overall
, butter
and margarine
consumption
faced downfall
, Correct article usage
a downfall
while
low fat & reduced spread experienced steady
increase. Mid 1981 Add an article
a steady
butter
was the most popular and margarine
was the only competitor as alternative
with Add an article
an alternative
lower
ranking. Starting Add an article
a lower
of
1996 new trend of low fat and reduced spreads become popular till 2001.
In Change preposition
in
comparison
of Add an article
a comparison
the comparison
consumption
between butter
and margarine
, for the year of
1986 with 160 grams results seen Change preposition
apply
in
Change preposition
apply
butter
as the well known
product. Add a hyphen
well-known
On the other hand
, just around 1991 to 1996 margarine
spread reached its top number of 100. Both products dramatically decreased as the statistics of 2007 shows
in Fix the agreement mistake
show
squence
of 70 and 60 grams.
Being introduced to local consumers low fat & reduced spreads become increasing products from 1996 to 2001 with more than 80 grams Correct your spelling
sequence
consumption
rate. In between
2001-Change preposition
Between
2007
Correct word choice
and 2007
downfall
trend hit all Correct article usage
the downfall
existed
products.Wrong verb form
existing
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, margarine, butter with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 4 times.
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