The graph below shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007.

The graph below shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007.
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The graph describes
consumption
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of
margarine
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, low fat and reduced spreads and
butter
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between 1987-2007.
Overall
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,
butter
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and
margarine
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consumption
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faced
downfall
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a downfall
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,
while
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low fat & reduced spread experienced
steady
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a steady
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increase. Mid 1981
butter
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was the most popular and
margarine
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was the only competitor as
alternative
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an alternative
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with
lower
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a lower
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ranking. Starting
of
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in
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1996 new trend of low fat and reduced spreads become popular till 2001. In
comparison
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a comparison
the comparison
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of
consumption
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between
butter
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and
margarine
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, for the year
of
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apply
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1986 with 160 grams results seen
in
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apply
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butter
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as the
well known
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well-known
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product.
On the other hand
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, just around 1991 to 1996
margarine
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spread reached its top number of 100. Both products dramatically decreased as the statistics of 2007
shows
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show
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in
squence
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sequence
of 70 and 60 grams. Being introduced to local consumers low fat & reduced spreads become increasing products from 1996 to 2001 with more than 80 grams
consumption
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rate.
In between
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Between
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2001-
2007
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and 2007
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downfall
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the downfall
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trend hit all
existed
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existing
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products.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, margarine, butter with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • spreads
  • increased
  • decreased
  • stable
  • significantly
  • approximately
  • per capita
  • remarkable
  • peaked
  • experienced
  • started
  • remained
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