Many people think that countries have a moral obligation to help each other, while other argue that the aid money is misspent by governments that recieve it, so the international aid should not be given to the poor countries in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Do rich
countries
have the duty to help the less strong economies? In Use synonyms
present
day, many people argue that the aid Add an article
the present
money
is misspent. I agree that the budget sent does often not Use synonyms
fulfill
the use it is supposed to. But should we really not give any contribution to the ones in need?
First and foremost, Change the spelling
fulfil
the
poor Correct article usage
apply
countries
are often Use synonyms
printed
by corruption. Verb problem
corrupted
For example
, in North Korea there are a lot of Linking Words
residences
Replace the word
residents
who's
Correct your spelling
whose
financially
situation has collapsed. Change the adverb
financial
For instance
, the people in the country are starving. But Linking Words
by
giving Change preposition
apply
money
to the government would not help them. The resources that North Korea would receive would Use synonyms
instead
go to the people in charge of the country. Linking Words
However
, there are other things that can be done.
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On the other hand
, Linking Words
money
may not be the solution Use synonyms
of
the problem here. As earlier mentioned Change preposition
to
money
is often misspent by the government. The richer Use synonyms
countries
can support by exporting other forms of needs, Use synonyms
for
Linking Words
instance
food. Add the comma(s)
instance,
To transport
boxes with food directly to the ones starving, we can make a big difference. Change preposition
By transporting
Then
the government would not have the opportunity to misuse our help.
Linking Words
To conclude
, it is important that Linking Words
countries
Use synonyms
who's
Correct your spelling
whose
financially
situation is stable help the poor ones. But the most optimal way to do Change the adverb
financial
this
is not by offering Linking Words
money
, since it is often misspent. Use synonyms
Linking Words
Instead
they can support the residences in other ways. By sending food, clothes and other Add a comma
Instead,
necessaries
we can make Replace the word
necessities
difference
. In Correct article usage
a difference
this
Linking Words
way
it is Add a comma
way,
garantied
that the help is used as it is supposed to.Correct your spelling
guaranteed
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