You are a football player, but you have to leave the team for a while, write a letter to your team-mate and say: - why you have to leave, - how much you love the football team, - when you are coming back.
Dear All,
I hope you find
this
letter on radiant health and the best of spirits.I am writing this
letter to inform you that I shall not able
to play for our team as I was hit by a car I am not able to move and may have to rest for Add a missing verb
be able
next
couple of months.
You know how much I love soccer. We both started playing football Correct article usage
the next
from
Change preposition
in
last
8-9 years.Playing football is my passion and soccer ground is the place where I feel most alive. Correct article usage
the last
By watching
Messi and Ronaldo play for their country and win trophies for their respective country Change preposition
Watching
that
motivates me to do something for our country too. Correct pronoun usage
apply
While
walking on street
I just Add an article
the street
lost
hit by Verb problem
got
unknown
car and I had an accident on Simcoe Add an article
an unknown
street
yesterday. Now luckily, It's just only one leg that got damaged and the doctor advised me to Capitalize word
Street
take
rest for Verb problem
apply
next
2 months.
I shall be back as soon as after 2 months I have an appointment with Correct article usage
the next
doctor
and he will Add an article
the doctor
a doctor
further
advice
if I need Replace the word
advise
further
treatment or not. I am sure I shall be able to get him on his feet very soon.
I am sure I shall be able to get on my feet very soon.
Your
Truly,
Avi BhadiyadraCorrect the word
Yours
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structure
Make sure each paragraph has a clear main idea and purpose.
grammar
Check for and correct any grammatical errors or typos to enhance clarity.
vocabulary
Consider using a more varied vocabulary to express your thoughts more vividly.
clarity
Be clear and concise in explaining your reasons for leaving and your emotions. This will enhance the impact of your letter.
content
Your letter effectively communicates the main reasons for leaving, your passion for the team, and your plans for returning.
tone
The tone of the letter is suitably formal and expresses genuine emotion, which is appropriate for writing to teammates.
personal touch
The use of personal anecdotes and references to popular football figures adds a personal touch and helps convey your passion for the sport.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,