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The graph show the average annual expenditure on cell phone and residential phone services

The graph show the average annual expenditure on cell phone and residential phone services
#show #expenditure #cell #phone #services
The above line chart represents the service cost data of
cell
phone
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phones
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 versus
resedential
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residential
phone
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phones
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. The chart depicts the data from 2001 to 2010 with the money
spend
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 ranging from $200 to $800.
It is clear that
,
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apply
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 both
services
shows
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a entirely different trends
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an entirely different trend
entirely different trends
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. In the year
2001
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2001,
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 the money
spend
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spent
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 on
cell
phone
services
 was $200
whereas
 in the case of residential
phone
services
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services,
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 it was about $700. There is a huge
varaiation
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variation
 between the two
phone
services
at
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this
 year. At a particular time
period
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period,
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 both
services
 seem to follow the same trend between 2006 to 2007.
Then
 the cost
for
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of
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 residential
phone
services
incremented
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increased
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 dramatically after 2007.
On the other hand
cell
phone
sevices
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services
 expenditure showed a clear decline trend.
To sum up
, the annual cost for residential
phone
services
 seems to be more
economic
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economically
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 friendly than the
cell
phone
services
. It might be because of the low usage of residential phones
now a days
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nowadays
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cell, phone, services with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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