The graph show the average annual expenditure on cell phone and residential phone services

The graph show the average annual expenditure on cell phone and residential phone services
The line graph illustrates the average money per year
that is
spent on cell
phone
services
and residential
phone
services
in 10 years starting from 2001 to 2010. The unit on the Y-axis is shown in dollars.
According to
the figures,
it is clear that
the trends of both
services
are reversed.
While
the expenditure on mobile phones rises throughout the period, the home
phone
drops. On the one hand, the mobile
phone
started at well over $200
then
steadily increased to reach a peak at nearly $720 in 2010.
However
, minimal climbings were seen in two periods of time which between 2002 to 2003, registered $310, and 2007 to 2008, represented $650.
On the other hand
, the house line
services
began at just under $700 in 2001 and continuously decreased to almost $400 in 2010. There were two noticeable nosedives which were from 2001 to 2002 and 2006 to 2007, which were about $650 and $480 respectively.
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