The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.
The bar chart depicts the
number
of estimated world illiteracy rates by region and gender for the
last
year. The majority including Sub-Saharan Africa, Arab States, and South Asia have a high
rate
of illiteracy. In the information people in South Asia have the highest
rate
of the six regions. More women in South Asia have a high
rate
than men. The Figure for women is almost 55 % and for men around 35
while
higher than in other regions. The
number
of females in Sub-Saharan Africa and Arab States is around 52 and 48
percent
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, respectively. Meanwhile, The
number
of males in Arab states is lower than
Sub-Saharan
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Africa
In contrast
, Minorities in the two regions including Developed Countries and Latin America or the Caribbean have the lowest data
rate
in the graph. In the same way. It means the region has Literacy people
number
around 3 to 4
percent
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in six areas and the
number
of males and females have a smaller difference,
However
, Women have a
number
higher than men.
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