The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.
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The bar chart depicts the
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of estimated world illiteracy rates by region and gender for the
last
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year. The majority including Sub-Saharan Africa, Arab States, and South Asia have a high
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of illiteracy. In the information people in South Asia have the highest
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of the six regions. More women in South Asia have a high
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than men. The Figure for women is almost 55 % and for men around 35
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higher than in other regions. The
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of females in Sub-Saharan Africa and Arab States is around 52 and 48
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, respectively. Meanwhile, The
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of males in Arab states is lower than
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Africa
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, Minorities in the two regions including Developed Countries and Latin America or the Caribbean have the lowest data
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in the graph. In the same way. It means the region has Literacy people
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around 3 to 4
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in six areas and the
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of males and females have a smaller difference,
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, Women have a
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higher than men.
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