The pie chart shows the percentage of car ownership by make in three countries in 2015. Summarize the information by select and report the main features, make comparison where relevant.

The pie chart shows the percentage of car ownership by make in three countries in 2015.

Summarize the information by select and report the main features, make comparison where relevant.
The pie graph illustrates the proportion of people who own cars in different nations in 2015.
Overall
,
it is clear that
Greater China and Europe were
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dominant in the pie, and they accounted
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% and 25% respectively. These were the closest groups in
this
year. Looking at the diagram more closely, one can see that almost half of
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survey
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occupied by China and Europe. North America was the third biggest category, only
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19%. Japan and Korea
also
had big percentages in
this
sector, and they were at 16%. Other countries were less than 10%. South Asia's figure was only half of the sum of Japan's and Korea's. Twice South America's performance was equal to
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South Asia's. The Middle East and Africa's number was only 50% of South America's.
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, Japan and Korea's data was eight times that of the Middle East and Africa. The sum of the three lowest nations
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still less than
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • car ownership
  • make
  • country
  • comparison
  • distribution
  • vehicle preferences
  • automotive market
  • popular brands
  • market share
  • dominant
  • proportion
  • trend
  • variation
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