The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same period.

The table and the pie chart compare the

number

tourists

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went

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who went

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to Ashdown

Museum

and the amount of their satisfaction before and after some renovations.

Overall

,

it is clear that

the

museum

had become more popular after the repairments. Meanwhile, the

constructions

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had

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increased the amount of satisfaction among

people

as well.

To begin

with, the year before the renovations, about 74000

people

visited the

museum

while

this

number

increased after the

constructions

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by about 20000

people

. Before the repairements, about 15 per

cent

of visitors were very content with the

sevice

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service

of

museum

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the museum

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, just half of the

number

of

people

who were satisfied. But the year after, the

number

of very satisfied

people

experienced a rise to 35 per

cent

but couldn't

overtook

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th

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the

percentage of satisfied ones by 40. The

amount

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of dissatisfied individuals saw a sharp decline from 40 to 15 per

cent

. Just like that, there was an erosion in

number

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of very dissatisfied fellas from 10 to 5 per

cent

. Simultaneously, in both years, about 5 per

cent

of fellows decided not to express their opinions about the

museum

, as much as very dissatisfied guys in the year after refurbishments.