The chart below gives information about the production of grains, measured in million metric tons, from the years 2010 to 2015, with projections until 2030.Write at least 150 words.

The chart below gives information about the production of grains, measured in million metric tons, from the years 2010 to 2015, with projections until 2030.Write at least 150 words.
The chart illustrates how
million
metric
tons
the grains were
producted
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produced
between 2010 to 2030
suspected
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. On the whole, wheat was the highest in all four countries, following barley, maize and rice. The first noticeable point is that wheat and barley continued to
increased
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every year during
this
time frame. Specifically, wheat began the period at 100
million
metric
tons
, and
then
it will rise to 110
million
metric
tons
by 2030. Surprisingly, barley had
second
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highest quantities but it will increase incredibly from a low of 50
million
metric
tons
in 2010 to 100
million
metric
tons
by the end of
this
period.
On the other hand
, There were almost the same amount of quantities in maize and trice in each year and it will not change until 2030. Looking more closely, maize
were
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around 34
million
metric
tons
and Rise were approximately 25
million
metric
tons
during
this
period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million, tons with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.

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