Tourism is one of the fastest growing industries and contributes a great deal to economies around the world. However, the damage tourism can cause to local cultures and the environment is often ignored. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Tourism

is one of the

fastest growing

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industries and contributes a great deal to economies around the world.

However

, the damage

tourism

can cause to local cultures and the environment is often ignored. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Tourism

has two opposite sides,the first one can bring sharply increased fields and maintain the

economy

among

countries

,

however

,the second side of

tourism

can bring potential drawbacks to local folks and impact

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the environment poorly. I totally disagree with

this

statement that

tourism

impacts poorly on the environment and culture

,

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because

tourism

can bring opportunities for

countries

to be popular in international areas.

Also

established wages for hotels and maintained the

economy

of the

country

. First of all,

tourists

are an established

economy

of many

countries

today. They make regular

income

to owners of hotels and

this

maintains the

economy

of the

country

.

Moreover

,many

countries

rely on

tourism

,which has the highest percentage of

income

.

For example

,Turkey is one of the most popular

country

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for vacation and the

economy

of

this

country

in many cases consists of a percentage of

tourists

.

Furthermore

, the increase

of

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tourist numbers can lead to studying

of

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foreign languages,especially English,German,

Russian

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and Russian

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which are most popular among

tourists

and can upgrade their knowledge of

language

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the language

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and

are able

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to find a second job with ability.

Hence

, these qualities can lead

countries

to have potential

income

and establish their name in the international area of travel.

However

,the opposite side of

this

stream can be dangerous to culture and have environmental consequences. Many of the

tourists

,who have reached their destination, can start to discipline themselves and

this

can be the cause of misunderstanding between citizens and foreign people.

For example

,

the

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world cup

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in France in 2016,when many supporters came to France and destroyed facilities

such

as cafes,restaurants and metros.

This

problem consists of two problems with contamination,which were made in

this

country

and show the misunderstanding between people who lived in

this

country

and who came to the World Cup.

To sum up

,

this

statement has advantages to economics with the highest percentage of

income

and studying of foreign languages,

however

, it has disadvantages to local green and local culture. In my point of view,despite the disadvantages,these opportunities have potential benefits for the government and

good

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for the

economy

.