Tourism
is one of the
fastest growingAdd a hyphen
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industries and contributes a great deal to economies around the world.
However
, the damage
tourism
can cause to local cultures and the environment is often ignored. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Tourism
has two opposite sides,the first one can bring sharply increased fields and maintain the
economy
among
countries
,
however
,the second side of
tourism
can bring potential drawbacks to local folks and impact
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the environment poorly. I totally disagree with
this
statement that
tourism
impacts poorly on the environment and culture
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because
tourism
can bring opportunities for
countries
to be popular in international areas.
Also
established wages for hotels and maintained the
economy
of the
country
.
First of all,
tourists
are an established
economy
of many
countries
today. They make regular
income
to owners of hotels and
this
maintains the
economy
of the
country
.
Moreover
,many
countries
rely on
tourism
,which has the highest percentage of
income
.
For example
,Turkey is one of the most popular
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for vacation and the
economy
of
this
country
in many cases consists of a percentage of
tourists
.
Furthermore
, the increase
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tourist numbers can lead to studying
of Change preposition
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foreign languages,especially English,German,
RussianCorrect word choice
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which are most popular among
tourists
and can upgrade their knowledge of
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to find a second job with ability.
Hence
, these qualities can lead
countries
to have potential
income
and establish their name in the international area of travel.
However
,the opposite side of
this
stream can be dangerous to culture and have environmental consequences. Many of the
tourists
,who have reached their destination, can start to discipline themselves and
this
can be the cause of misunderstanding between citizens and foreign people.
For example
,
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world cupCorrect your spelling
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in France in 2016,when many supporters came to France and destroyed facilities
such
as cafes,restaurants and metros.
This
problem consists of two problems with contamination,which were made in
this
country
and show the misunderstanding between people who lived in
this
country
and who came to the World Cup.
To sum up
,
this
statement has advantages to economics with the highest percentage of
income
and studying of foreign languages,
however
, it has disadvantages to local green and local culture. In my point of view,despite the disadvantages,these opportunities have potential benefits for the government and
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for the
economy
.